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Tuesday, 15 November 2011
My Advert for 'IPhone 4s'
This is my advert for the IPhone 4s and I think it is a grade B because it has the company name and logo it gives you facts and information and there is a slogan.
I agree with Ollie actually about your advert. I think its great, with excellent images chosen and great colours used. But it is a LITTLE cluttered and could do with being a little bit simpler to make it easier to read. Great work though.
Also the following things are currently missing from your blog: * Analysis of two professional adverts * Film Marketing Research * Analysis of two film posters
Hey Glenn it's Ollie! Nice blog it looks good and by the way your advert is great but a little cluttered.
ReplyDeleteatm your product analysis doesn't make much sence!!!
ReplyDeleteYh it dose your just Jealous :D
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ollie actually about your advert. I think its great, with excellent images chosen and great colours used. But it is a LITTLE cluttered and could do with being a little bit simpler to make it easier to read. Great work though.
ReplyDeletePRODUCTION = 4/5 = B
Also the following things are currently missing from your blog:
ReplyDelete* Analysis of two professional adverts
* Film Marketing Research
* Analysis of two film posters